Life Line
By Beeme
Fri, 31 Jul 2009
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I creep across the path of life.
Tightrope, that could easily
turn into a rope and strangle
if it wanted to. So I wobble,
as I imagine many people do
traveling from one side to the
other. Making many good
friends along the way. The pink
fleshed baby growing taller.
Wiser. Life's lessons flow like
a stream straight into my grateful
hands, waiting to be absorbed.
Wolves circle and they also dip
their heads in, casting moon like
shadows and drink from the stream.
So I tiptoe gently, teasing the rope,
finding my feet.
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The last lines are wonderful
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
The last lines are wonderful and such an original image. I think we're all desperate to keep our balance - I guess the trick is not to look down ;)
Magic xxx
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glad i read this again -it
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
glad i read this again -it is a great poem Bemee, super :)
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Well done on the cherry
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Well done on the cherry Beeme!!!
Magic xxx
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Beautiful poem beeme. A very
Permalink Submitted by sarah wilson on
Beautiful poem beeme. A very well deserved cherry:)
sarah x
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New Beeme Well done on the
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Beeme
Well done on the cherry congratulations
It's very true to life everyday.
Glad your back.
julie x cavalcader
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A beautiful poem, well
A beautiful poem, well constructed, great imagery.
ankari x
ankari x
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"Beauty walks a razor's
"Beauty walks a razor's edge, someday I'll make her mine
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