Mixed bag

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By big stu

Fri, 06 Nov 2015
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7 comments
 

Can you guess what's in this bag?

I bought it just for you

It's full of things I thought you'd like

Perhaps you'd like a clue.

 

My quirky sense of humour's there

My love for you as well

My passion that you love so much

Whispered in French ma belle.

 

My patience too is hidden there

And understanding tucked inside

My friendship too in troubled times

When tear stained cheeks have dried.

 

This bag was made for you my dear

I hope it make's you smile

It's not expensive I'm afraid

But I hope it proves worthwhile.

Certificate U
Poem
Romance

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Wouldn't it be nice if you could mass produce these, though each individually crafted. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by big stu on

Yes I'd like a bag like that too - thanks for comments.

Submitted by celticman on

ah, the treasures we carry. 

 

Submitted by big stu on

Unfortunately most of carry unwanted baggage and not treasures - thanks for comments.

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

Surprise.... it's now all out of the bag...

Nice poem!

Submitted by big stu on

Ha ha , very funny but thanks.

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

smiley

Your first line... "Can you guess what's in this bag" made me think I was supposed to guess...

but you revealed all!

So I didn't have to guess...

I really liked the poem, so although I was trying to be 'funny', I wasn't really being 'funny'...

Ah... it's an "oleary thing... no one would understand"

laugh