Bankrupt
By Bradene
Thu, 21 May 2009
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He’s running out of patience
his energy levels low;
he says he’s lost direction
can’t recall which way to go.
He says his heart feels empty
can’t even feel the pain;
each thought that occurs to him
keeps slipping thro’ his brain.
Emotionally bankrupt
feeling insolvent and bust,
he’s entirely without funds
of optimism, love or trust
So I said I’d be banker,
Receivers he wouldn’t need.
I’m his only creditor
though our terms must be agreed.
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Charming, enjoyed :-) atb
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Charming, enjoyed :-) atb Lena
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Very clever! The rhythm is
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Very clever! The rhythm is so tight; very enjoyable. The last stanza, brilliant ;)
Chris XX
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This is great! I'd love to
Permalink Submitted by MrSquirrel on
This is great! I'd love to hear it read aloud.
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