Birthday
By cc1959
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When you said
That for you
Life had only just begun
I did not hear it. But
Then I saw you
Watching your girl
Scoop up the last
Precious finger-full of cake
Whilst you endlessly
Sought
Not to lose
The thread of her
For more than an arm's length
Not to look back
And let the old words in.
On the way home the sun
A bright oil-spill
On a half-finished canvas
Car thrumming
Like an old spin-dryer:
I felt life's dogged beat
Against the earth,
And somewhere
Barefoot on wet flagstones
A child sang
As if at last
Someone was listening.
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Comments
I'm listening. Love the idea
I'm listening. Love the idea of the sun as a bright-spill. Yeh!
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Reaiise really liked this,
I really liked this, especially the last line. That gives it so much meaning.
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I liked all the content of
I liked all the content of this little tale.
This line really appealed to me "...the sun A bright oil-spill On a half-finished canvas..." very visual I thought
Regards
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