Mr Smith

Cherry

By D G Moody

Tue, 14 Feb 2023
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     (For Stevie)

                                                                        We never saw him.                                                                                                                               He left a towel on the beach.                                                                                                                                 He just swam on;                                                                        Until he was out of reach.

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Submitted by Mark Burrow on

Extremely effective and very sad. 

 

Submitted by D G Moody on

Thannks Mark. Yes, I thought we could read this in two ways; and again, I took my inspiration from Not Waving But Drowning - my attempt to condense what was already a spare but profound poem.

Dougie Moody

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Sad, and unaware of those being left behind to mourn. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by D G Moody on

Thanks Rhiannonw. A funny little poem that came from left field. And can I also say thanks Ed. for the Cherry; we aspiring poets need encouragment. smiley

Dougie Moody

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You managed to convey so much in so few words.

Congrats on the well deserved cherries too.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by D G Moody on

Thanks Jenny, for your feedback, and I was very appreciative of the cherry.

BTW. There may have been some confusion over the title; Mr Smith does not refer to the great Stevie Smith, who was a woman (I did asked this)

Dougie

Dougie Moody