The Hangover ..
By denni1
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On waking, her lids stuck together
Contact lenses not removed
All the lights on, back gate open
Contents from her handbag, strewn
Pillowcases black with make up
Clothes ripped off, upon the floor
Stepping out, she leaves her cocoon
Shaky limbs hang on to door
Now a regular occurrence
Being slaughtered cuts out pain
She knows the scenario does not work
But cannot stop this drink/love game
Many times she's had a nice boy
But no one likes a woman drunk
They soon find out why she's needy
Childhood stuff she cannot junk
Another day spent nursing herself
Lonely, pretty little doll
No one knows about her battle
Demons lurking behind walls
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/This is such a harrowing
/This is such a harrowing write, denni. I think you did an amazing job capturing the character here.
Rich
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Hello Denise, I'm glad you're
Hello Denise, I'm glad you're still around and writing. This is poignant and truthful and powerful stuff.
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Hi denni.
Hi denni.
I found this very moving - there is great understanding in this non-critical poem.
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This is very good 'lonely
This is very good 'lonely pretty little doll' there must be so many young women suffering like this Elsie
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