Lonely lass

By denni1

Sat, 03 Sep 2016

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This woman, boy, she really stinks
A booze and unwashed fake-tan mix
Her husband dumped her years ago
Down-hill, zig-zag, sweaty blow

In-and-out men cum, don't ring
She's a pathetic, whining thing

We've tried with hinting
Sprayed deod and minted
The backcombed weave's now crawling
Her doc's got files
There's pills for smiles
But it's way beyond his calling

The lad's are jeering
Stop with that sneering

What would YOU do ?

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Shes a hero thats what she.

Permalink Submitted by thornwood on Sat, 2016-09-03 16:50

I would tell her She is unique so unique a poem is dedicated to her.keep writing.

Stephen d

Thanks for reading. Could be

Permalink Submitted by denni1 on Sat, 2016-09-03 16:57

Thanks for reading. Could be any one of us, eh ..

Yeah your right denni we go

Permalink Submitted by thornwood on Sat, 2016-09-03 17:14

Yeah your right denni we go with grace. I liked your poem was well structured and the last line made me think a little bit more.

Stephen d

Kind of you to say. Sometimes

Permalink Submitted by denni1 on Sat, 2016-09-03 18:01

Kind of you to say. Sometimes we can let things slide a wee bit. Cheers, man ..