Neuralgia Nostalgia

By drkevin

Sat, 24 Feb 2024
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Remembering those days when I liked to doodle.

Walking along with the pink penis poodle.

Tent on the lawn, all kit and caboodle.

Rollicking old film stars, with the occasional canoodle.

Earning cash at the café, but hardly a boodle.

Never wanting to eat a hot pot noodle.

No idea about an apple strudel.

Then growing up, off I did toodle

(Pip).

 

Certificate PG
Poem
Humour
Nature
Miscellaneous
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Nolan on

Good rhyme! Natural, easy, not forced, not doggerel. Well done! Just the p... feels out of place. Cultural differences? Neuralgia?

& Nolan

 

Submitted by drkevin on

Hi. Thanks very much for your comment. Glad you enjoyed the piece. As regards the 'Pip', toodle doesn't seem to be an accepted word by itself. It only seems to exist conventionally when linked to pip (i.e. meaning 'goodbye'). So I just played with the words accordingly! Thanks again.