Hidden Title
By Ewan
Wed, 23 Mar 2011
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I seem alive,
You hear me breathing,
He exists,
We think,
You perceive,
They remain.
It glows red,
It smells freshly made,
It sounds right,
It tastes sour,
It feels soft.
Each verb counts.
Place each carefully.
Real writers
Ink words,
Make pictures,
Etch outlines.
There is no is.
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Interestingly (or not) I
Interestingly (or not) I read the other poem first and I can see the conundrum more clearly in this poem, but again I don't have any answers.
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I don't know what the title
I don't know what the title might be but I do like this.
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