Sad

By Ewan

Tue, 28 Jul 2009
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If you are sad,
this too, will pass
- last no more than
the blink to clear a teardrop.

If you are sad,
you too will thrive
- rise high over
the shock that stopped our heartbeat.

If you are sad,
I too will weep
- keep faith with you,
the one that kept me breathing.

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Lovers, Liars and Just Good Friends.
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Comments

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
very nice, 1st and 3rd my favourites.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new ewan liked it all.so true to life! one I kind remember bit "Iv'e found now I will hold the christlight for you in the night-time of your fear; I will hold my hand out to you, speak the peace you long to hear. I will weep when you are weeping; when you laugh, I'll laugh with you. I will share your joy and sorrow till we've seen this journey through . and then one day in church I went. julie x I have found now 3 other verses! it is beautiful. hymn.found in call box once.

Submitted by Beeme on
Really nice poem with great imagery. Loved this line; '- rise high over the shock that stopped our heartbeat' and all of verse 1 and 3. :) Beeme xx

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