The Shells And Stones (Villanelle)
By hadley
Wed, 30 Mar 2011
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The waves will wash the shells and stones
As flotsam tumbles over shores
And leaves the bodies and the bones
Of creatures water now disowns.
Despite the secret hordes it stores
The waves will wash the shells and stones
Ashore, and then the wave’s soft groans
And sighs before the wave withdraws
And leaves the bodies and the bones
To sky and air, while wind intones
A song of death across seashores.
The waves will wash the shells and stones
Across the beaches no-one owns
And cleans the sand the tide restores
And leaves the bodies and the bones.
The tossing sea will give no homes
Discarding those it now abhors
The waves will wash the shells and stones
And leaves the bodies and the bones.
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Hadley. I'm a sucker for sea
Hadley.
I'm a sucker for sea tales.
I shall remember this one next time down on the beach.
regards.
ScoZen
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Hadley. I'm a sucker for sea
Hadley.
I'm a sucker for sea tales.
I will rember this one next time down on the beach.
regards
ScoZen
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So rhythmical, lovely and
So rhythmical, lovely and lulling, sounds like a sad lullaby,
J x
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love your poem,
love your poem, unfortunately the last line should be: and leave the bodies....(grammar!) may be you can somehow change it into singular (wave?) to make the last line repeat correctly? See what I mean?
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