Infinite Sky- entry 2

Cherry

By Highhat

Fri, 21 Dec 2012
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14 comments
 

He walks
And he talks tall
The world is at his feet

He arranges
and rearranges all
He won’t accept defeat

He takes on challenges
And before you know it
He’s won

He doesn’t complain
And he doesn’t mind a bit
Being my son

He has one blue and one green eye
but when I look into them
I see the infinite sky

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Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is beautiful Pia - good luck with the competition!

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thanks Insert ;)Pia

Submitted by moonphish on
beautifully expressed, love the ending :) - alvin

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you for reading Alvin- much appreciated. ;)Pia

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is beautiful, Pia. Less is often more, as here, and there is so much written between those lines, as well. Tina;-)

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thanks Tina- I intend to write as many entries as I can come up with- Tony is going to be very tired of me- ;)Pia

Submitted by Denzella on
Well, Pia, we won't be. This is great. Just lovely! Good luck with this one too. Moya
 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thanks heaps Moya- ;)Pia

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Quite a tribute, Pia. I expect he also enjoys a Mum who's there when things don't go quite right, too! I enjoyed the concise form and use of rhyme in this one, too. regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Highhat on
It's not because I look him in the eyes that often Rhiannon but it is mainly meant as a metaphor. He's a lovely boy and like all others we have our ups and downs. And when it goes well it's such a joy. Thank you for your comment. regards ;)Pia

Submitted by celticman on
I think there's a bit of bias creeping in Pia, but hey he is your son! What is it you call that one eye blue and one green again (as the character Audrey has in Lonie)?

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Of course he can be a regular pain in butt at times- ha ha What do you call it when there is one green and one blue eye? I don't know. Thanks for reading this. ;)Pia

Submitted by ScoZen on
HejPia. A late dip into this one, intend to catch up on the rest of them soon. "... And he doesn’t mind a bit Being my son..." What more could a mum wish for over Christmas. Passe pa.
ScoZen

Submitted by Highhat on
You are quite right Scozen- thanking you for stopping by. hej og pas på ;)Pia