I have a dream
By hoalarg1
Tue, 14 Feb 2012
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Last night I had dreams that woke me,
Like my alarm without the sleeper.
I cursed their bitter intrusion,
Sought to erase with strong tea and dry toast.
But their memories stuck in my throat,
Demanding another brew.
The day came and emptily dragged by my window;
It threw litter in my hedges,
Grew weeds in my bed
When I dozed.
Later I ignored the tapping on my door,
Blamed the strengthening wind
Whispering messages through my letterbox.
Pills tonight to batten hatches,
May make the pillow softer.
***
Last night I didn’t have a dream.
Yet the sun barely rose.
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I like this a lot hoalarg1.
I like this a lot hoalarg1. Black dog breathing and growling a waking snore. Thanks for sharing.
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I like it too, 'The day
I like it too,
'The day came and emptily dragged by my window;
It threw litter in my hedges,
Grew weeds in my bed
Great lines, and I love the ending.
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This piece is full of great
Permalink Submitted by steve_elliott04 on
This piece is full of great lines - shoe got to my favourites first! You create a stark atmosphere here with excellent use of language, and structure too. The ending is genius.
Cheers,
Steve.
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My friend just read your
My friend just read your poem, and liked it a lot and was very moved by it! As I also was! Look forward to read more from you!
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Yes I remember very well !
Yes I remember very well ! And thanks for the push! I'll post some more soon!
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Hello, I liked this poem
Hello,
I liked this poem very much also. The lines already picked out by Shoe I thought were sheer brilliance.
Moya
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