A Potted History
By InspiredWriter
Mon, 26 Nov 2012
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A young girl,
Trapped in the cages of apartheid,
Stares at me
Through the garden fence,
As I ride by,
High up in my truck.
White face,
White against the clouds.
I look to the floor,
See the earth -
The same colour as her skin,
The beauty within.
A flower ready to blossom,
To grow up out of these walls
To surprise the world.
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I very much like the idea of
I very much like the idea of you seeing yourself through her eyes looking up at you - good balance to this as well with the earthy description of her skin and a lovely ending.
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This is so beautiful, IW.
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is so beautiful, IW. And I 'ditto' what has been so eloquently said by fb.
Many congrats on the well-deserved cherry.
Tina;-)
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