Lemon Shark

By Jane Hyphen

Tue, 28 Apr 2015

4 comments

She is a Lemon Shark

A solitary dart

Flashed caustic gold

In her bathwater hold

Circle eyes blind

Bowed ratchets primed

Mum strokes from afar

A pulse in her spa

Stirring volts, turning thew

Silent slink into blue

Permalink Submitted by celticman on Tue, 2015-04-28 13:38

a solitary dart, how great thou art, a shark as a machine seems somehow obscene, but in the deep blue watch it anew.

enjoyed.

Permalink Submitted by Jane Hyphen on Tue, 2015-04-28 14:39

Thank celtic, and for your compulsive rhyming. We are definately the killing machines underwater and above it.

Permalink Submitted by Bee on Wed, 2015-04-29 10:07

This is lovely, Jane. Beautifully described.

Bee

Permalink Submitted by torscot on Thu, 2015-04-30 20:16

I need to take extra care when skinny dipping

torscot