5, 12, 19, 26

By JupiterMoon

Thu, 02 Jan 2014
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5, 12, 19, 26

 

the first,

we walk the earth,

shy like new conkers.

 

the second,

we drink our health away,

our watery grins, coupled.

 

the third,

we swing so high the chains go slack,

cold faces, coming together in the half-light.

 

the fourth,

brings fire from deep inside,

as something beautiful, flames between.

 

 

 

Certificate U
Poem
Yester than Betterday
Romance

Comments

Submitted by scratch on

That's an interesting concept and written in a light and simple fashion that disguises the depth that the whole thing has.  I really like it, well done JupiterMoon.

 

Submitted by JupiterMoon on

Thank you very much - that's a lovely comment. It's another poem inspired by the same lady as 'I Wanna Fall in Love At Shudehill'...she has no idea these poems even exist...yet ;)