Jungle


By Justin Tuijl
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(This poem is based upon my experience in Ecuador 2011)
Sweat bees cling to our faces
and get in our ears as we cut
large leaves to sit on
placed over the stinging bugs
on the ground.
And we sit eating and aching
with thick mud on our boots
And plucking leeches from the
pulled up socks
Our dried food is hard to eat
and washed down with stale water that
we have carried for hours.
Black fly and mosquitoes bite our flesh
and then monkeys congregate in the
trees above, chatter and scorn
and try to piss on us.
(2014)
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Vivid little description of
Vivid little description of being 'on the ground' trekking in there! Rhiannon
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The descriptive language took
The descriptive language took me right into the poem - a great read. My only (minor) quibble, is that planet may not be able to look after itself - at least as long as humanity occupies it.
My apology to Justin, I obviously misread the poem ...... Dougie
Dougie Moody
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I had wondered whether to
I had wondered whether to comment on that too! I suppose many think they can provoke the necessary changes and give up, and we do need to encourage better ways, but it is the promise that God will make all things new that is the ultimate hope – and the call to personally trust him now. Rhiannon
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