Autumn wish moon song

By Kahdai

Thu, 21 Oct 2010
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Am I asking too much of you
My autumn wish moon? Moooon
Ahahah answering all my own
que-estions out here alone!

If I can't hear, answer you
is because I am calling own
name, trying to find myself
lost my mind and my memorys
maybe they are all we have!

I can't hear poems you read
or promises you said asleep
so I cant blame you, if you
can't keep them, I was glad
you made them atall o moon!
Thankyou for making believe
how true my wishes could be

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What beautiful words, tell the Autumn moon your wishes. Lovely poem Kahdai. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thankyou very much Jenny for reading and commenting. Am very glad you like it! K x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Highhat on
I thought it was nice too ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, I have just been looking at the moon from my kitchen window, I immediately thought of your poem, just wonderful. Jenny.

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Like Jenny just put the dog to bed and seen your giant moooon above the trees outside. This feels like a song to the moon. Well done :-)

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Ooh thankyou all! It was like to the moon, out on the bike at night for the first time in ages, song in my head :) K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "