Not quick enough

By lyssagurl_l0l

Sat, 14 Jan 2012
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4 comments
 

Like a clear blue sky,
So ready to write.
I rush to the computer
With ideas so bright.
But it won’t revive with brisk.
Grabbing a sheet,
And consuming a risk,
Of scrawling thoughts of my heart.
Hell, once again,
There goes fine art.
I've lost it. And now,
Filing in, clouds from miles,
Bearing their glimmering
Red, mocking smiles.

Certificate U
Poem
Drama

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Read this one this morning, Alyssa, and didn't have time to comment. Just to say, liked very much. Its rather 'brusque' style suits it well. Tina;-)

 

Submitted by lyssagurl_l0l on
Thanks Tina :) ~:)alyssa(:~

~:)alyssa(:~

Submitted by fatboy74 on
And now, Filing in, clouds from miles, Bearing their glimmering Red, mocking smiles. I really like that, it's cleverly done and doesn't feel forced. :-)

 

Submitted by lyssagurl_l0l on
Thanks fatboy, that's really appreciated :) ~:)alyssa(:~

~:)alyssa(:~