CINNAMON FRECKLES

Gold cherry

By moonphish

Fri, 14 Nov 2014
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how delightful were the freckles
that adorned her skin, so fair
like stars up in the heavens
they were scattered everywhere
.
she always smelled like cinnamon
a sweet environment
and often times, i wondered
did her freckles cause that scent ?
.
she said she didn't like them
and i found i had to beg
to see the constellation
of orion on her leg
.
she talked of creams and lotions
that would make her freckles fade
she envied girls with pure white skin
and wished that she could trade
.
we ended up as lovers
and although, you may just scoff
the contact of our bodies
caused her freckles to rub off
.
she now enjoys the elegance
of alabaster skin
while i am wildly freckled
with orion on my shin
 
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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

haha - I love the ending!

 

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks so much,,,,,glad you enjoyed

Submitted by sarahrdickson on

I love freckles too!

Sarah R. Dickson http://www.proseonthego.com/

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks Sarah, freckles are the best

Submitted by Bee on

Lovely!

Bee

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks Bee for dropping by

Submitted by VeraClark on

Freckles rule. I always longed for them. Never got the gift. Ending made me smile.

 

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks so much Vera, glad ya dug it

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Such a lovely idea!

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks so much Philip

Submitted by MJG on

bounces along all sparkly like freckles, I heard that a face without freckles is a sky without stars and that they are the kisses of Gods and fairies....

 

Submitted by moonphish on

ehat a beautiful comment, thanks so much MJG