Moon

By Parson Thru

Thu, 02 May 2013
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5 comments
 

There's the moon

Pale whiteprecise
halfmoonshaped
ghost of itself
against a fragile sky

Regular and real
among the fakingclouds
slashed by
soonforgotten
trips to america

No one sees you

Certificate U
Poem
Parson Thru III
Nature

Comments

Submitted by VeraClark on
Stunning.

 

Submitted by The Walrus on
Nice one, Parson, short but sweet.

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Lovely Vera, Julie and Walrus. Thank you.

Parson Thru

Submitted by scratch on
Somehow these brief stanzas have managed to convey a sense of physical and emotional movement Parsons. You have got to be one of the most accomplished writers of short pieces on the site. It's not an easy skill and shouldn't be underestimated either. Another good one as usual from you.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Thanks MD. Nice of you to pick up on these things. Very grateful.

Parson Thru