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By ralph
Wed, 20 Mar 2013
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5 comments
It's building.
This angst.
Thick black bile,
in heavy weather.
Avenues empty,
paths harden.
This heat haze,
can be grabbed.
I sit in profile.
Hopper honed.
Framed by skylight,
pin focused.
She enters.
A lead ball rolling.
Coffee buzzed,
amphetamine brewed.
I explain.
She listens.
In tongues,
as usual.
She grasps truth,
and gathers,
her thoughts.
I step away.
A shuffling boxer.
Arms aloft,
to the electric street.
Pink blossom snows,
from bowing trees.
I meander,
to a place in the sun.
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This great - "Hopper
This great - "Hopper honed"....I like that, very evocative. Also the ending, the final stanza.
I was going to post something, now I don't think I'll bother!
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I love this poem, "A lead
I love this poem, "A lead ball rolling", great writing.
M.T.Maitland
M.T.M
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My favorite: She enters. A
Permalink Submitted by hudsonmoon on
My favorite:
She enters.
A lead ball rolling.
Coffee buzzed,
amphetamine brewed.
I explain.
She listens.
In tongues,
as usual.
They go together so well. Enjoyed much, Ralph.
Rich
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Can't add much to what has
Can't add much to what has already been said. I must say though that I did admire your reading or more accurately your performance at the York night
Moya
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