Love Forlorn
By Reid Laurence
Sat, 01 Sep 2012
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The sea and mist
Have lightly kissed
The shore again
And all points when
I take my bow
To heed the stern
The sea again
By ocean yearn
And rain my face
In transient place
To sea again
An algae lace
I turn to see
The rain is gone
Forever now
My love forlorn
She tells me not
Like storm before
When we began
Or when it tore
Surprise to me
Upon its end
Do I refresh
Or never mend
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love the rhythm in this
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love the rhythm in this poem!
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I think this is rather good
I think this is rather good - takes a few reads but it's a good reminder of why we shouldn't over-complicate things. Nice one.
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