I Am the Voice
By Richard L. Provencher
Tue, 05 Mar 2013
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that whispers --
morning is emerging.
I see a man absorbed
in wake-up duties
starting car for warmth
a splotch of grease
riding his sweaty shirt
headlights now peering off
to work --
tool and die maker
by trade
son to follow
in his footsteps?
A crow’s first swing around
the neighbourhood
seeking leftover favours.
I observe one child
backpack almost the size
of his thin frame
Playbook tucked safely
away --
mother anxious
for son to get going
he’s engaged in fighting
sleepiness –- school
bus 7am soon.
Morning claps with
activity -- as dew clasps
twigs and limbs
in a last grasp to exist
sun’s yoke bringing
in new life -- and rising.
© Richard L. Provencher
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R, your best write so far
R,
your best write so far IMVHO...and almost genius.
Almost because only the title and your use of grease L4 seem first choice to me rather being critically reasoned. Perhaps, the masters voice here needs more oil or even yolk to be anointed even more rationally *>convoluted cough here<*
love it
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