Shark

By samhennig

Tue, 26 Oct 2010
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15 comments
 

Were you eaten by sharks,
I would be sad,
You would not be sad,
You would be dead,
So avoid the sharks,
I don’t feel like being sad
For the sake of a full shark.

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by pinda on
Had to read this a few times to get my head a round it. it's like a freaking riddle :) Good work on wordplay though! Isn't meant to be 'Were' instead of 'where. for the first word?

Submitted by samhennig on
Haha, thanks! And yes it is were, Not quite sure why i put where?!

Sam Hennig

Submitted by pinda on
No problem, simple mistakes can be made when writing such creative pieces of writing. :)

Submitted by samhennig on
Haha, thanks! And yes it is were, Not quite sure why i put where?!

Sam Hennig

Submitted by samhennig on
Ye it's funny how all the obvious things seem to go out of your head sometimes!

Sam Hennig

Submitted by Highhat on
I think it is a cute little ditty. hehe

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
You made me laugh Sam, and this is crying out for an illustration

 

Submitted by seashore on
Yes this is my kind of humour!

Submitted by shoe on
Witty and wry, love it.

 

Submitted by samhennig on
Thanks!

Sam Hennig

Submitted by fluffeu on
I like it. Makes me happy. Life as simple.

Submitted by chooselife on
Marvelous piece.

 

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
A fab way of saying I love you: don't get eaten by sharks :)

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Great this.

 

Submitted by samhennig on
Thank you for the comments :)

Sam Hennig