Some Poetry

By SanguinarianNightmare

Tue, 17 Jul 2012
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Cheers,
Cheers raise a glass, kick the ass of all your fears. Cheers, raise a glass, drink your problems away. Drink until the bottle's empty. Untill all you have is loneliness. So now, cheers raise a glass. The last to bring the tears of hopelessness.

Sorrow's Scars,
I don't know what to do, my head is spinning so fast. I'm getting dizzy and now I fall to the ground. I'm pulling her with me, and soon we will all see the monster that's in me. A fire that's so bright, and the heat is just right. She turns to leave me and now there's no light. My blood starts to bubble and now we're in trouble. My love is great but my actions show hate.

War,
I fight my empty heart with her by my side. She can smile and tear my soul to shreads. I love her but I shouldn't. She is the my close friends girl. But worse then that I fear she feels nothing for me, no not in the least. But, "Don't let her go!" I hear from my inner blood-thirsty beast of war.

Certificate 12
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by jolono on
Firstly, welcome to the site. There's a lot going on here Sang, it feels like there is something boiling underneath. I liked the way you seperated each section, very original and well written.

 

Submitted by SanguinarianNig... on
Thankyou for the "welcome". A lot of my work is about the same girl, who has basically destroyed me. Also thankyou for the compliment. I'm glad someone likes my work and (as my life's pain) there will be more on the way :)