Ticket to Ride
By Silver Spun Sand
Wed, 09 Nov 2011
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We sat by the ocean that night,
and watched the tide go out...
Waves, crashing on the beach
then receding, again, and again;
and in its wake, detritus...driftwood...
one algae encrusted shoe; bottles,
plastic bags, battered Coke cans.
Couch grass rattled in the dunes
We missed the last train back,
and I fell asleep – head on your lap,
on a bench at the station, and yet
I don’t even remember your name...
not presently. It’s not you I yen for,
it’s those days I miss – days of
‘What the heck’, when we just knew,
without question, we’d always
make it home again.
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I did enjoy this. So
Permalink Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
I did enjoy this. So atmospheric.
Linda
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What I could have done with
What I could have done with all the detritus, Tina - creatively I mean - takes me back to Devon and living by the sea...
Also takes me back further too of course and I share your memories of youth...much enjoyed.
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Hi Tina, What a wonderful
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
What a wonderful poem of memories you conjure up
and that ending just made it for me. Reminds me
of not having a care in the world.
Thankyou for sharing.
Jenny.
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This is so lovely Tina, I
This is so lovely Tina, I really enjoyed :)
Beeme xx
k.
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This really made me remember
This really made me remember Tina- I love the way you seem to spark these memories of youth in some of your poems. It is so good. I do remember if the last bus had left we would just walk or like it is said here just wait at the station on a bench. Who cared? We had oddles of time and energy. We could conquer the world!
Loved it
;)Pia
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Ahhhh... another Silver Spun
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Ahhhh... another Silver Spun masterpiece, Tina, and very much enjoyed :)
Rachel xx
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