Nature's War
By smokejack
Thu, 02 Dec 2010
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This cold November day
Has thrown open its doors
To see more of what it can do
Across the fields I tread
Towards a grey horizon
Watched by clouds
that loiter with intent.
The cropped stalks of corn
Frozen in the ground
Lean like worn crucifixes
Abandoned in a battlefield
Long after the battle cry
A sheet of snow
Covers the dead
Footprints from creatures
Are woven inbetween
The lifeless
The wind whips, bites and nips
As it dances with the cold that grips
Circling flesh and bone
Slowing the tempo
To a shivering still
There is a sneaking sun
Making shadows of stripped trees
Carved into history
Like frozen ships
Upon a static sea
©SJ2010
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this is beautiful smokejack
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this is beautiful smokejack
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I have read this several
I have read this several times and can see what all the fuss is about - this is some poem , very well done. :-)
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Not read this before
Not read this before smokejack. I'm glad I have read it now mate. A fine effort, well done.
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