Well Suited
By threeleafshamrock
Thu, 11 Mar 2010
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Bedspreads, sheets; all washed and folded,
lay stacked neatly at the end of the bed.
Clothes, sorted into type and season
for the benefit of 'Oxfam' or the 'Cancer Shop'
but not yet...not yet.
I watch as she pulls a suit from the wardrobe,
there is a blouse, almost hidden, inside.
She sniffs the blouse, eyes closed and then
holds it tightly to her, breathing deeply.
Holding it at arms length, she stares at it.
With a sniff and a multiple blink, she sighs,
replaces it and closes the door – locking it.
Turning to me she states firmly and yet
almost enquiringly;
'I'm keeping that one!'
'Good, I find myself almost whispering,
I think you should.'
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yes, me too Chris
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
yes, me too Chris
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you pack such a lot of
you pack such a lot of meaning into a few moments of time, I almost feel like an intruder, delicately done.
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Me as well. Thinking of
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Me as well. Thinking of you, Chris.
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This is simply beautiful,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
This is simply beautiful, Chris. I'm glad you're able to write about Kathleen and I'm sure she's reading every one of your poems and smiling ;) Well done on a well-deserved cherry, and as always, my thoughts are with you and your family.
Magic xxx
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Yes, agree with everyone
Yes, agree with everyone else - simple and beautiful.
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