Unforgiven

Cherry

By whiskey

Sun, 09 Aug 2009
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6 comments
 

Subbed to a comp, so temporarily deleted.

Certificate U
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Comments

Submitted by celticman on
A two for one deal? I like it.

 

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Equal shares; it's only fair, I suppose. Another class short! XX

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New hi! whiskey another "Agatha Christie" but sometime many things go wrong at funerals sad especially over silly possessions not worth it many ok. but families ugh! julie cavalcader

Submitted by whiskey on
Thank you, guys. :-) Is it clear that the section in italics isn't/hasn't really happened, and that it's just poor Helen fantasising (because her dead husband's daughter by his first wife hates her guts and will therefore make life as difficult as possible)?

Submitted by tcook on
It seems to me that it might or might not have happened - and I like it all the more for that.

Submitted by whiskey on
A cherry! Thank you, admin. :-) And thanks for taking time to comment, Tony. Of course, if it HAD happened, it would be quite a different story to the one I'd intended, though I'm not sure exactly what the alternative story could be. Will have a think about that!