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You have raised the standard!
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
You have raised the standard!
To touch so many people through writing as you, I cannot do that? You do it over and over again, you are one of the very best :0)
Read full commentPosted in Setting Sons
It's hard leaving feedback
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
It's hard leaving feedback for your poems? Every time I read them I find something new, my understanding must grow, while I am away. Congratulations on POW, on finding a way to bring comfort through beautiful words. I felt such peace at the end,...
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The comma after understanding
Posted on Thu, 15 Apr 2021
The comma after understanding is like a deep breath of relief :0) You convey the tension of the atmosphere before very well
Read full commentPosted in Storm clouds rolling in
you express that feeling very
Posted on Mon, 12 Apr 2021
you express that feeling very well, sort of like waiting for a wave to fall but it doesn't and it doesn't. I like how you embrace the whole of humanity at the beginning, too
Read full commentPosted in Suddenly, not there …
Really love this poem! You
Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021
Really love this poem! You made me feel the excitement of other ages, the thrill of believing in magic, at the same time as describing the reality of the equinox, which is powerful too
Came back for a re read and so sorry had not realised...
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Thankyou! Did not know the
Posted on Sat, 10 Apr 2021
Thankyou! Did not know the original rhyme and would not have written it without reading your wonderful version first. Also Drew's opinion of robins :0) The original is so long, I kept having to look to see how many more verses to go!...
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Seems to me the sparrow in
Posted on Thu, 08 Apr 2021
Seems to me the sparrow in the original rhyme confessed a bit easily? Was he being leaned on or blackmailed do you think? eg "if you say you done it we'll spare your missus?" You convey the feeling of a rigged trial so your poem's ending comes as...
Read full commentPosted in Who killed Cock Robin?
Rich with your way of seeing,
Posted on Fri, 09 Apr 2021
Rich with your way of seeing, how you conjure the majesty and marvel of life in so few lines. I am really glad you got out into the sunshine and the wild, Rhiannon. It is like seeing a butterfly open its wings reading this :0)
Read full commentPosted in Good Friday Stroll, 02/04
I am so sorry for your loss.
Posted on Fri, 09 Apr 2021
I am so sorry for your loss. Your uncle will be at peace and full of light now?
I am grateful that you could write how you felt, as this poem is intense. No one describes abstract things the way you do! I love
"should time ahead...
Read full commentPosted in Moving Forward
Maybe if the heart is like an
Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021
Maybe if the heart is like an egg, inside there is a creature which can fly, and needs the heart to break so it can be free?
Read full commentPosted in Humpty Dumpty
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