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Cherry

Companion planting

Bedding policy.
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Melange IV

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171 of my comments have received 183 Great Feedback votes

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Lovely

Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016

as the tide's wave on sand; melancholy, joy, breathe in,  breathe out.

best regards

Lena xx

 

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Posted in Girl with Yellow Wings (Poetry Monthly)

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Succint

Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016

..and successfully conveys amongst other many other inherent themes, simplicity and complexity of learned motor skills/comfort/autopilot as part of addiction/comfort process (mimes filling and switching on electric kettle)  Like,like, like....

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Posted in Never forget smoking

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This..

Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014

...'

 within the tangled scrim,

a branch snags, and eyes – orbs, 

a lethal mix of ambergris

and antonyms

reflect –  become

the moon.'

 

By crikey lovely lass, tha' can conjure dark beauty!...

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Posted in Night Moves

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Lovely surreal soundscape...

Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2014

... I wondered if you might look at your enjambment and punctuation; consider pace you'd like the reader to follow with eye and heart. Quick review of spelling. All these edits I make too, so not poking at you. :)

best wishes

lena...

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Posted in a light

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Expressed...

Posted on Sat, 26 Jul 2014

...as milk from a breast with mastitis. Some pains cannot be prepared for, You handled this piece with sensitivity and knowing. A carefully worded build of peer networks and experience relied on, to a point where they cannot go, because all else...

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Posted in It All Came Out in the Wash

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Surprised...

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

...that this wasn't an editor's choice. You've handled an abhorrent practice with a dry, factual narrative, a voice relating incident as so 'ordinary'  as counterpoint to this horror, raising the mostrousity beyond any use of hyperbole.

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Posted in Crime and Punishment

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Good write, I shall lay a

Posted on Mon, 02 Jan 2012

Good write, I shall lay a trail of nutmeg, as for Birds of Paradise :-)xRead full comment

Posted in I Stand Outside

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Gentle trotting rhythm,

Posted on Sat, 31 Dec 2011

Gentle trotting rhythm, warm, melting into the green of ancient woodland :-) Ah, g'wan, I'm an old softy. Happy new year Ewan xxxRead full comment

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