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Story | Catching Up | celticman | 8 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Story | Drizzle | Rhiannonw | 17 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Story | Dozey Bella and Cippy | jeand | 16 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Story | The Loneliness of a Cuckoo | onemorething | 16 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Story | Dinner with Adele | Mark Say | 9 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Story | Goatie 34 | celticman | 5 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Story | Clarabelle and Friends | luigi_pagano | 6 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Story | Goatie 33 | celticman | 6 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Blog entry | back home again | Tom Brown | 6 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Story | Chewing the Cud | luigi_pagano | 8 | 1 year 5 months ago |
Blog entry | Never Give Up | Richard L. Prov... | 5 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Shelter For The Weary | skinner_jennifer | 13 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Cow — and Bull | Rhiannonw | 8 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | North of Taiga | marandina | 9 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Woodland Walk | Ewan | 4 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Blueberry | Jane Hyphen | 13 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Goatie 32 | celticman | 6 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | wising up | Di_Hard | 14 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | A Precarious Situation | luigi_pagano | 16 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Poetry Makes Nothing Happen | Ewan | 7 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | A confession | Itane Vero | 2 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Matrices Mound | sean mcnulty | 5 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Ranthambore | marandina | 21 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Goatie 31 | celticman | 9 | 1 year 6 months ago |
Story | Holy Cows | Angusfolklore | 7 | 1 year 6 months ago |
"It is a dark night
Posted on Sat, 13 Jan 2024
"It is a dark night
in Berlin in 1938."
You capture a sense of foreboding in one of the grimmest periods of history. This is a night of the utmost infamy. Your poem captures it so well,Luigi. Keep well. Paul
Read full commentPosted in One Night, in Berlin
I could see those gulls and
Posted on Fri, 12 Jan 2024
I could see those gulls and massive walls of rolling water. Such a visual, evocative poem. Just lovely, Richard. I hope you are keeping well. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Sun - Shines
The dialogue is credible and
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
The dialogue is credible and the pacing is good. I like the world of espionage and intrigue that you have built here. Looking forward to the next instalment :)
Read full commentPosted in The Coffee House Spy" 13
Such a deeply personal piece.
Posted on Thu, 21 Dec 2023
Such a deeply personal piece. The authenticy shines through which is why I imagine so many people have connected with it. It takes a great deal of skill to pull off writing something from a child's POV and the result being credible. That's...
Read full commentPosted in Children of the Absolution
"But now, do they regret
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
"But now, do they regret
behaviour of that time desire to forget?
living presently by better rules,
wishing that they hadn’t been such fools?"
I like the rhythm and rhyming in this. I imagine it took a while to...
Read full commentPosted in Digging up dirt
Ah those poor bankers -
Posted on Mon, 08 Jan 2024
Ah those poor bankers - blamed for all of society's ills and yet so blameless :)
There's more than an ounce of truth in here (I know....I've worked with 'em for a lot of my career).
I once looked at a "sure-fire money spinner"...
Read full commentPosted in Make Millions in Two Minutes...
"..and then the people
Posted on Fri, 05 Jan 2024
"..and then the people beneath the stars
who are also phantoms of sorts..."
Often the best poems come from simply observing life. There's a stillness to this, a watchful appreciation of another. There's a skill in moving that to...
Read full commentPosted in Culver
"..we soaked, dripped,
Posted on Sat, 06 Jan 2024
"..we soaked, dripped, dropped,
seeped right into the ground
to restore
its wetness,"
A perfect circle described so beautifully. There's a deftness to this that makes the poem so readable. Just lovely, Rhiannon. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Autobiography (but not mine!)
"Wind battering, rattling,
Posted on Wed, 03 Jan 2024
"Wind battering, rattling, howling,
thunder growling,
rain pounding, ground flooding,"
A tumultuous opening that captures a storm so well. And boy have we had some recently. They feel never ending. Maybe there are sunnier skies...
Read full commentPosted in Storm
Ooh that's a cliffhanger
Posted on Mon, 01 Jan 2024
Ooh that's a cliffhanger ending. I like this shift to sentience that's unravelling.
"You're more human than a human".
It's a compelling read. Keep going!
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you....Part 11
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