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The Cup That Cheers
My writing class was given the task of writing in the second person. I found it very difficult, not sure if I've managed it. A small ornate table,...
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Cornucopia
Cornucopia, Cachet, Cadeaux and Collectibles. Have you ever heard anything so pretentious? Especially above a premises selling car boot sale...
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To Whinge or not to Whinge, That is the Question
Another writing class exercise, writing as therapy. Not sure if it has helped but I enjoyed writing it! I enjoy cooking and especially trying new...
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Neverland
My writing class was given the task of putting a character from a 'novel' into a different situation. Not sure if this is too close to original! Abi...
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Time Lost
A concept that has defeated philosophers down through the ages. Man and his place in the universe, are we the peak of existence or just the servants...
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If only those lost moments
Posted on Thu, 17 Mar 2016
If only those lost moments could be retrieved, but then I suppose that is part of life 'if only'
So beautifully and succinctly put.
Lindy
Read full commentPosted in The Time Saver
This is a fantastic
Posted on Mon, 01 Feb 2016
This is a fantastic description Tina. Love the comparison with a machine, you can see why people have plastic ones next to their ponds. On holiday and watched a heron on the beach it stood stock still for ages ignoring sand crabs that scuttled by...
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When my sister in law was
Posted on Sat, 05 Dec 2015
When my sister in law was diagnosed with breast cancer, she'd had some removed and was told that it might not spread but opted for a single mastectomy, to 'be on the safe side'. She was 70 and I know that makes no difference to how you feel about...
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So, so beautiful. And such a
Posted on Mon, 26 Oct 2015
So, so beautiful. And such a wonderful testament to your daughter. Your words capturing beauty lost and still existing I like that you included 'but now I'm content to remain'. I'm amazed that your skill with words and imagery just continues to...
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'a maze of so many no-through
Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015
'a maze of so many no-through roads' such a telling phrase. So sad that the real person is still there but does manage to surface occasionally. Sad and funny in equal measures, love 'the best frilly draws.'
Lindy
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A hope for a better future
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
A hope for a better future well presented.
Well done.
Lindy
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So much in this and behind it
Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015
So much in this and behind it Tina. Many things hinted at which leaves us with our own interpretation. But the beauty of the poem still remains.
Lindy
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Tina, you never fail to have
Posted on Mon, 31 Aug 2015
Tina, you never fail to have lovely little, and beautiful, insights into your daughter's too brief life, and death.
Love Southwold too and your description of the beach huts is more than poetic.
A poem that brings tears and smiles,...
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The title and the picture you
Posted on Mon, 10 Aug 2015
The title and the picture you chose so much at odds with the content of the poem but it adds to its poignancy.
I am sure that there are many young girls in such a situation, trapped by their needs.
A well written thought provoking...
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'the things we were going to
Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015
'the things we were going to do tomorrow', so poignant.
A sad poem of lost love and lost tomorrows, so well written.
Lindy
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