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980 of my comments have received 1066 Great Feedback votes

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No, sorry, you have to finish

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2016

No, sorry, you have to finish it.  Soon as possible.  Please. 

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Posted in Crisp

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This is a really interesting

Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2016

This is a really interesting read - I love the mix of fact and personal reminiscence.  I've never read 'A Kid For Two Farthings' but I remember seeing the film on telly years ago.   As far as I recall Diana Dors was in it - which sounds  unlikely...

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Posted in Unseen Britain - Whitechapel, Wolf Mankowitz, George Bernard Shaw

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I like the fact that there is

Posted on Mon, 21 Mar 2016

I like the fact that there is no compromise in this - it is a genuine shock when there is no rescue for Dawn.  The crows convey so well the sense of a primeval power at work, and I felt the story was at its best in the passages describing that...

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Posted in A gathering of crows part 2

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Reads much smoother and if

Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2016

Reads much smoother and if anything even creepier!  Absorbing and disturbing.

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Posted in On this wild October Evening

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I really like this - very

Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2016

I really like this - very descriptive and I like the circular construction.  Genuine feeling of malice and the pacing works really well. 

I think it needs a bit of proof reading - there are some bits I had to read over a couple of times to...

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Posted in On this wild October Evening

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Hi, welcome to ABC Tales.

Posted on Sat, 12 Mar 2016

Hi, welcome to ABC Tales.

Interesting opening and lots of potential for moving forward.  I think it would benefit from some proof-reading - there's a mix of tenses in the beginning which is confusing for the reader, and in your penultimate...

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Posted in Searching for Change ch.1

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I've been watching the recent

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2016

I watched the recent TV series on the Inca - they had a similar idea of different layers or types of time co-existing for each individual.  Fascinating. 

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Posted in Pacha

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Arrival of the Conquistadors?

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2016

Arrival of the Conquistadors?  Or, as celtic says, a particularly hot night in Ibiza?

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Posted in Pacha

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I am always so envious of the

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2016

I am always so envious of the way poets such as yourself can create wholly believable characters and situations by the skillful placing of relatively few words, and by the rhythm you create.  This was very moving, and that last stanza will stay...

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Posted in Too Cold for Snow...

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Enjoyed this - fun and great

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2016

Enjoyed this - fun and great imaginative use of the names.  I thought the beginning was strong and you kept the pace up well.  It seemed to lose a little of the life when we got to the section where the apes appear - I got the impression you...

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