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A Lonely Place
Signing up
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Night Visitor
Early childhood memory
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The theme is really cleverly
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2014
The theme is cleverly worked into this along with the message. Fabulously rhyming, too, which for me keeps the interest and enhances the subject matter.
I enjoyed reading your poem so much, Rhiannon, and I'll have another look at it later...
Read full commentPosted in Jonathan’s arrow sign (IP)
This is beautiful, Shannon
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2014
This is beautiful, Shannon and very moving. I'm not always into love poems, but this one is so honest and true, it drew me in and also made me think.
Read full commentPosted in Love Feels Time
Hi Frances.
Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014
Hi Frances.
Thanks for the explanation - that was really interesting. Read your poem again and still like it very much.
Bee x
Read full commentPosted in Thandi
It should have got in. Just
Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014
It should have got in. Just one small point - I believed rhino horn is not bone, but compacted hair. But then I read:
'The rhino's horn has no bone in it at all. The fact that it is made entirely of keratin led scientists to guess that it...
Read full commentPosted in Thandi
There is something delicate
Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014
Hi Maisie.
There is something delicate and wistful about this poem that I really liked. I thought the way you switched tenses back and forth made it interesting, too. I found I had to really think about that.
Liked and enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in the bench
I think this works so well as
Posted on Thu, 03 Jul 2014
I think this works so well as a short story, but like scratch, I'd love to see it go on. It is hard hitting, but it made me want to cry that anyone could buy - 'if the price is right and they’re in good nick (them - then? ) I'll take...
Read full commentPosted in Welcome To England
I know I shouldn't pick just
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014
'ride the splendid spine
of a thought-train,'
I know I shouldn't pick just this bit out, but I adored it, so I did. If this is you not writing poetry because it's out there to see, Lord help us when you try.
Beauty...
Read full commentPosted in Poetry and That
Lovely piece of writing. I
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014
Lovely piece of writing. I was quite moved by your thoughts. It made me think of how we have been able to form connections along a more spiritual line with people we've never physically met, but speak to by letters, or more recently, by email. ...
Read full commentPosted in Scribbles
The other half of the story.
Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2014
Morning, Tina.
The other half of the story. Poignant and perfectly worded to draw appropriate sympathy. She's a hero.
Read full commentPosted in No Fairy-Tale – This
Hi Tina.
Posted on Wed, 04 Jun 2014
Hi Tina.
This could mean something different to each reader. It meant something to me and I loved it and found it very moving.
Read full commentPosted in Phoenix Rising
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