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Did You...

By Bee on Sat, 12 Sep 2015

Did you take my hand and lead us to the edge of water, where our damp companions leapt cavorting on the firm and level sand? Did their sinking feet...

Love

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Songing - (a poem for hudsonmoon)

By Bee on Fri, 11 Sep 2015

For Rich who is so kind.

Autobiography

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Only the Lonely

By Bee on Thu, 10 Sep 2015

Nature

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Margaret

By Bee on Mon, 07 Sep 2015

An unexpected phone call Much to the annoyance of anyone trying to get hold of me by telephone, I've stopped answering these days. It's become a bit...

Autobiography

Story

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288 of my comments have received 274 Great Feedback votes

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'A cold breeze, comes down

Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015

'A cold breeze, comes down
from the crack of window
hit on my face
cold winds meets fresh tears
bring me to the reality'

I liked this stanza. Ithink it could be made into a poem by itself.

Posted in Nameless

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Morning Ed.

Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

Morning Ed.

Feel like I've just watched this on TV, it's so cleanly written and vivid in the mind. Like Vera says, sharply detailed - visually and atmospherically, too. Very much enjoyed reading - (twice).

Posted in Frozen Secrets

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Hi Alina

Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

This is heartfelt and very moving writing. Writing like this can be a great outlet for our feelings in life's ups and downs, and I hope it helps you as much as it has me at times.

Best wishes,

Posted in What I felt when I saw my mom smiling

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I like the division in this,

Posted on Mon, 23 Feb 2015

I like the visual divisions in this, and the eventual lack of any kind of distinction. The picture in my mind from -

'On my knees – tulips in hand
green railings coruscate the sky
where earth and heaven meet –
run my...

Posted in Green Railings

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This is so clever and funny -

Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2015

This is so clever and funny - especially this - 'Uranus wouldn’t be a place
I’d have a pied-à-terre,
but if you did, I’d visit you,
yet I shouldn’t tarry there.'

Cheered me up no end and started day with a smile....

Posted in Ticket to Fly...

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The question for me is - are

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015

The question for me is - are we slaves to the 'beauty' industry, or are they cashing in (like every other industry) on our weaknesses and existing desires, as much as creating them? Most of us (male or female) want to look nice, if not pretty, ...

Posted in The death of beauty

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Enjoyed.

Posted on Wed, 18 Feb 2015

Enjoyed.

Posted in Eggyman

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I liked this one, bosch -

Posted on Fri, 13 Feb 2015

I liked this one, bosch - good and natural assonance in the melding of words and flow of thoughts, which draw back to past, then bring us to the now, with the idea of exploring imagined opinions and reactions of the next generation. It starts out...

Posted in For S., 8 Poems (7/8)

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What a wonderful story, so

Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2015

What a wonderful story, so beautifully told. You melted my heart with this, made me smile, and brought a tear to my eye. Best story I've read so far this week. I loved it!

Posted in Without Socks

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To me, this is very much

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2015

To me, this is very much about her own desperation at a confused interpretation of the uncaring situation she finds herself in, and also that for those looking after her (the elderly) it's often more than easy to forget that they are just us...