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My Boy

A poem for my kitten.
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Unconditional

With thanks
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Book Ends

Here are some words - my words for you scurry across the page on busy little legs to toil amongst the diamonds; climb the hill to the top of meaning...
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Back to Beach

I went back to the beach but you were not there so I waited till half light and slept in the sand cooling till dark when I woke up and passed out the...

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288 of my comments have received 274 Great Feedback votes

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Reading this, I was struck by

Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015

Reading this, I was struck by what it would have meant to write, and especially, to receive letters like these. A brilliant way to piece together a story and a natural way to supply detail. Really well done!

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Posted in Laura's Letters - 3 - The Next Year

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This is a fascinating story

Posted on Thu, 08 Jan 2015

This is a fascinating story of love and possession, and really well written. For me, there's a compulsion to see what he doesn't want to come true, and if he gets what he would, or should want, he'll lose all. I'm probably jibbering talkish, so I...

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Posted in A Bowl of Water Falls

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This first stanza is

Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015

This first stanza is amazingly deep and - the 'no more than you are in the sketch you would have drawn of them.'  is so strong I can't stop thinking about it. To not be in something you never got to do is the most less there of possibility - too...

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Posted in You Are No More...

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Really sad. There's a feeling

Posted on Fri, 02 Jan 2015

Really sad. There's a feeling of regret, too , I think. At least someone cared - then wrote this lovely, atmospheric poem. 

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Posted in Rock Bottom

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Such a matter of fact run

Posted on Fri, 19 Dec 2014

Such a matter of fact run through of a life -(so far), without an apparent opinion, leaving the reader to decide how to feel about the events, joyful, sorrowful. Such a mixture, even though one event overpowers the rest. I felt a positive...

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Posted in A Passing Thought

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As usual, you've tied this

Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014

As usual, you've tied this all together so brilliantly, Jean. Difficult though it must have been for him to tie all the notes together to make a book, you did it, and did so, fascinatingly. Full of hardship and lack of foresight with regard to...

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Posted in We Who Survived -18 - Visit to the Sager Sisters part 2, Epilogue

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Letting go is the hardest

Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2014

Letting go is the hardest thing, especially when you were never supposed to. There's so much love in this, Tina. It's heartbreaking. It's something about looking back at the memories - and no one knows back then, what's ahead. As usual, no...

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Posted in Quarter to January

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Something rings so horribly

Posted on Sun, 09 Nov 2014

Something rings so horribly true in the nature of this. It reminded me of loads of stuff it would fit in with. Surreal, horribly fascinating and compelling. 

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Posted in Collecting Samples

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Most of all, I really felt

Posted on Fri, 28 Nov 2014

Most of all, I really felt the loneliness in this. No one to confide in, and having been 'groomed' using apparent common interests, the feeling of the greatest betrayal and desertion. There's so much more to the story than is written. Very clever...

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Posted in Only Silence Speaks the Language of Birds

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This was fantastic - made me

Posted on Mon, 17 Nov 2014

This was fantastic - made me laugh as well. Loved the ending. Loved everything. 

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Posted in I Woke up and!!!

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