David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.5 by Alfred Muggins (himself) Part 2 : Wives
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Part 2 : Wives 4/5/23 / 8/7/23 Alfred, who is not one to ever force a woman to do what she doesn’t want to, relented. The real Henry might have used...
The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.5 by Alfred Muggins (himself) Part 1 : Caretaker King
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8/7/21 Alfred had been entrusted with Henry’s Kingdom while the King was away in the future, but the real Henry would eventually return, when fixed...
Tuesday Morning (How To Leave Your Job!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2
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Part 2 8/2/23 (25/8/23) Some of the calls the day before had been fine, small enough issues which he could deal with, pleasant customers, who weren’t...
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Tuesday Morning (How To Leave Your Job!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 1
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7/2/23 Sitting here at a local beauty spot. Alfred had never given up a job in such a way before! Always previously he had given notice in that...
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There’s a new sick line, for calling in sick apparently! By Alfred Muggins, Call Centre Agent!
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6/2/23 There’s a new sick line, for calling in sick apparently. We had a buzz meeting, and the team manager mentioned it. Apparently if we call in...
C S Lewis did include
Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2023
C S Lewis did include Dionysian Greek creatures in his Narnia books, such as Fauns, Centaurs, Dryads, Nymphs and Nyads. They seemed to make up quite a large proportion of the population of Narnia, and they were able to go into hiding during the...
Read full commentPosted in Charms Of Dionysus
Your writing will be a good
Posted on Wed, 22 Feb 2023
Your writing will be a good way to remember this tragedy looking back in future years, and some of the personal tragedies you outline.
Read full commentPosted in Christian Atsu.
They should have labelled it
Posted on Sun, 19 Feb 2023
They should have labelled it more clearly. However Earl Grey is a pleasant variant from normal tea in my opinion! I am sure it has enabled me to write certain pieces I might not otherwise have written over the years.
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An awful tragedy! I think we
Posted on Fri, 10 Feb 2023
An awful tragedy! I think we knew the final figures were going to be a lot higher given that they are just counting the bodies. When we see the pictures and hear the detailed stories it brings the cruelty of this disaster closer to us. The...
Read full commentPosted in Negative Feedback From eBay.
Could this be the future? Can
Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2023
Could this be the future? Can we construct a virtual or everlasting heaven? Great writing, characters remembering and re-experiencing life, and maybe going to heaven?
Read full commentPosted in The Edge of Heaven
I do also think this is a
Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023
I do also think this is a great piece, very melancholic, and also very real. A very natural style, with humour and sadness!
Read full commentPosted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?
This really was a good piece.
Posted on Fri, 27 Jan 2023
This really was a good piece. You really manage to show the negative feeling of the funeral and the low mood of the narrator perfectly. You get the feeling that his life and good memories are very much in the past and gone.
Read full commentPosted in end of the pier
Nice poem! It certainly
Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023
Nice poem! It certainly paints the scene. This come from a scene in a romantic film with Tom Hanks in it does it not? It rings a bell, but it is a while since I saw it. I like the idea of repainting a scene from a good film!
Read full commentPosted in A View of the Hudson
You make a very imortant
Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2023
You make a very imortant point here Luigi, that the good guys do not always win, even now in the Post 1945 world. It is important that we all realise that!
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I did enjoy this 'miniature'
Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2022
I did enjoy this 'miniature' satire of Brexit, but then it occurs to me that the Christmas economy may well dwarf the so called national economy in size. I once used to believe that the elves probably had it right, but nowadays we find that they...
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