David Kirtley

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My stories have been read 266233 times and 18 of my stories have been cherry picked.
216 of my 1,259 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 227 votes

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A Bad Deal! By Alfred Muggins

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23/1/23 Will there be anything of me left? Sign up for a proper job! Sell your time for an amount which really isn’t that much higher than the...

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216 of my comments have received 227 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed this realistic

Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2022

I enjoyed this realistic story. In this all too real Christmas Tale it seems too much damage has been done to the relationship, and Mick's late reversal of attitude seems to come too late to save his marriage! Not all Christmas tales can end well...

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part Two of Two)

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Good so far! An alternative

Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2022

Good so far! An alternative Christmas tale, infused with reality!

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part One of Two)

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A lovely story! It did bring

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022

A lovely story! It did bring a tear to my eyes at the recognition and acceptance of his place in the new family at the end! 

We have a little dog who has occasionally escaped from the garden to chase the foxes, which gets me worried...

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Posted in The Last Wish of Christmas

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I enjoyed this poem, as I do

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

I enjoyed this poem, as I do feel the issues you describe. I could never be described as a go getter so it seems to relate to me. It is not that I would wish to stop go getters from doing or being what they are or want to be. Perhaps I do feel...

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Posted in Life is for the Go Getters

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I enjoyed this moral tale,

Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022

I enjoyed this moral tale, and thought it was very effective. It did remind me of the scrooge story too, and another one which my wife and I read a few years ago, about a fairground repair man killed in an accident on a ride in New Jersey, in...

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Posted in The Last Door

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That was a great tribute to

Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022

That was a great tribute to Hawkwind and to Nik Turner! Hawkwind was the first 'big' rock concert I ever went to in November 1979 at Sheffield City Hall. Very powerful, but my ears were ringing for a week afterwards! I vowed to put cotton wool in...

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Posted in Edge Of Time That Influenced Mine - Nik Turner Tribute

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I agree! The egg thrower

Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022

I agree! The egg thrower should spend a shortish period in prison, and we should pray for the King and all our political leaders too!

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Posted in King & Queens.

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I did enjoy this one as well

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2022

I did enjoy this one as well Marandina. I did read it  a week or more ago. You are doing very well at keeping up with Tory Party activities, and also managed to paint them in seasonal goulish shades of dark humour! Great satire, as always!

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Posted in Halloween Boris

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Good poem! I certainly would

Posted on Tue, 01 Nov 2022

Good poem! I certainly would not want to be a politician! It is a thankless task, with guaranteed criticism. As you say they are only human, and most of us would probably be corrupted by the role to some extent!

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Posted in Pressures

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I don't quite know what to

Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2022

I don't quite know what to believe now? You've certainly got me dazed and confused now! This is very effective and had me convinced what reality was more than once. A story within a story, within a story. It is very cleverly done and keeps the...

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Posted in A Tale from Dark Woods

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