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The short sharp works really
Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017
The short sharp works really well, and I imagine it sounds very effective too.
When you miss someone and it's all you can write, is something I think many of us can identify with.
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Read full commentPosted in Mum's the word
Always nice to read something
Posted on Fri, 03 Mar 2017
Always nice to read something with a happy ending! I like the detail in this story, and the narrative flows really well. If you're looking for feedback, there are some auto correct typos, and some places where I think you might have repeated the...
Read full commentPosted in The Fairy Ring
A very thoughtful piece. I
Posted on Sun, 12 Feb 2017
A very thoughtful piece. I hope you get a lot of reads for this!
Read full commentPosted in You want to leave a legacy?
this is a really good
Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2017
this is a really good description - it feels just like that sometimes!
Read full commentPosted in On Trying to Write
Some great imagery in this
Posted on Sat, 04 Feb 2017
Some great imagery in this prose (poem?). Welcome back!
Read full commentPosted in Half a Cup
What a fascinating piece of
Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017
What a fascinating piece of life writing! I would love to hear more about those years of wandering. Any plans to write it up?
Read full commentPosted in (Not) Counting the Minutes at Falmouth Town Station
agree with all the above -
Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017
agree with all the above - such beautiful and detailed images in this word picture!
One small typo : you have a rogue apostrophe in the first stanza
Read full commentPosted in Promises of Spring.
I like it too!
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016
I like it too!
Read full commentPosted in Colour Blind
I think this is a very
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016
I think this is a very touching poem
Read full commentPosted in Silence
This is brilliant, and a well
Posted on Sun, 04 Dec 2016
This is brilliant, and a well deserved pick!
Read full commentPosted in Journey to Minneapolis
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