u & i
By dilletante
Tue, 24 Jun 2008
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4 comments
u and i
are mere vowels
that's true
but, mind you,
how true
would true be
without u to glue
the t, r and e?
surely you'd object
having to neglect
the i in mind?
i would find it
rather odd
without that
skinny sod
in my mind.
after all,
u r on my m n d
doesn't make sense
without i to support
the other three.
fine, you say
but what about
other vowels?
well,
a is o.k.
o is so-so
and e is the star of
the vowel ensemble,
but without
u and i
you can't spell
i luv u
and that is why
u and i
are the most
befitting letters
in the alphabetic universe.
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Comments
Clever but would have been
Clever but would have been more so if you could have kept it rhyming.
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Very clever, but an edit
Very clever, but an edit would make it truly great?! Starts strong and tails off a bit for me..
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I agree - a bit more work
I agree - a bit more work and it'll be very good indeed.
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