Haiku 1- Ice

Hi Yazmin, you need to decapitalise 'adrenaline'. A personal opinion is that it's better not to capitalise the first word in a line in a haiku. I count 8 syllables in your second line... why not put a colon after 'skates' (caesura achieved that way) and put 'wait for the adrenaline!' Keep writing Ewan

The sentiment and imagery is brilliant; really good, keep it up. Chris XX