Beam

Cherry

By lenchenelf

Tue, 10 Mar 2009
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2 comments
 

You bounce 'cross the lawn
without slightest care
for pounds per square inch
or underwear.

Spacehopper Pilots,
wingmen of my dreams,
you ride laughter currents,
side slide-slip sunstreams.

Paddling pool splosh,
crazed trampoline spring,
in bubble blown hiatus,
good weather brings.

Jam butty party,
Custard pie fight;
all in the bath now,
time for Good Night.

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Comments

Submitted by jennifer on
Superb couplet here: 'You ride laughter currents, Side slide-slip sunstreams;' wouldn't like to try saying it when drunk, however! Lovely alliteration! J x

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on
Thanks J, it is a bit of a mouthful :-) my youngest son loves tongue-twisters and rickety rackety noisy rhymes, I should employ greater discretion when peppering my doodles with them :-) :-) Thanks again atb Lena