Something to Say
By MistakenMagic
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I warm my bare feet on the dash board,
sitting in the boyish manner that makes you laugh,
as we drive up Avondale Road.
Yet, I know you have something to say –
I can tell by the way you grip the steering wheel.
You watch me from the corner of your eye.
The outside world seems curious; I think I can hear
the sky’s heavy breathing as it leans
over my shoulder through the sun-roof.
An inquisitive sun presses her hands
to the windscreen, burning my legs.
Trees congregate around our car,
fingering the windows.
Finally (with a sigh) you murmur:
“I’m leaving, Baby.”
The sky is struck dumb and retreats, stepping
on its own clouds. A careful sun slips behind
the horizon. The trees tip-toe away to whisper.
I remain calm, shifting slowly
to place my feet on the floor,
and reply: “I know, Dad. I know.”
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This is beautiful, Magic.
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Aw, this is sad :( As Beeme
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What mkes this for me is the
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Superb; back with a
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I agree with all that has
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Very well deserved
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new Mistakenmagic Well done
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new mistakenmagic thankyou
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very emotive poem, tender
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