My Surrender to the Ocean
By Kahdai
Tue, 09 Mar 2010
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I wade through heavy sand,
to get to the waters edge,
I gaze out to the open sea,
& horizon, give up my head.
I throw down the stolen shells,
drop the multi-coloured stones.
The driftwood waves me goodbye.
Reach to the horses of foam,
who lift me above their backs,
in churning under the waves,
I helplessly feel myself relax.
I don't want to worry,
about ever coming back.
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I love this Kahdai, The end
I love this Kahdai, The end rounds it off perfectly,
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i agree with shoe about the
Permalink Submitted by Curse of 222 on
i agree with shoe about the ending. the whole piece effectively captures a moment with some good imagery. i especially like: "The driftwood waves me goodbye."
do you use "&" instead of "and" for a particular reason?
jason
jason
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Very expressive. I love
Permalink Submitted by Luly Whisper on
Very expressive. I love watching the sea.
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