Why are we here?

By Kahdai

Wed, 06 Oct 2010
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Anyone arrive on earth
would feel this purpose,
angels or aliens or what
maybe somekind of holier
for if not to save them
oh why are we here?

We are not, no holy saviour
we are not angels in disguise,
we are only here try to help ya
yet we cant see between the lies.

we dont have much life to give
yet wouldnt take any from you

dont know how to help
we can always try
O we can try
I still try
so if not a saving angel
what am I?
& what am I doing here?
who am I
and why?

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, I think we are here, to be and do the best we can, to keep human kind going, to live our lives the best we can and to trust that what we do will effect mankind in a good way, obviously I know there is bad out there, but we as humans have to understand that in all things there is good and bad, it makes this world what it is. If everyone was good it would be bound to make someone angry, so there will always be conflict in the world, we are all different. You I can tell are a good person, so I would presume that you are here to spread goodness. You have touched on a very special subject, I think you are a special person, you should always remember, that it's not untill you look back on your life, that you realise what an affect you have had on the people around you. This was an interesting poem to me, hope I haven't spoken out of turn. Thankyou for bring up this subject. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Its for the competition Jenny http://www.abctales.com/forum/2010/09/29/writing-exercises that could be yours! K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love the rhymes in the final stanza, Kahdai. Good luck with the competition! Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Highhat on
A lot of questions not easily answered. well done Kahdai ;)pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
thankyou both!

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by fatboy74 on
I like the voice of this poem and the rhythm. Well done!:-)

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
thankyou! & thanks for reading! :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "