You Know I Lack Technique
By mjpitts
Wed, 03 Nov 2010
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Under the avenues you licked me thin,
stole my appetite
and left nothing
but your split peach mouth.
Stalking supple vowels in silence
I threw rocks at black faced garages,
hoped their cry
would turn your fishbone ears.
You know I lack technique-
my flat-chest pebbles
fall to the sea long before yours tire,
teasing waves, with kisses.
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Really, really good - split
Really, really good - split peach mouth is some metaphor - last stanza is brilliant.
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