Behind Closed Doors...
By Silver Spun Sand
Fri, 05 Nov 2010
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So gently she lifts her
onto the commode.
Light as a feather;
“No meat on your bones,”
the young woman jokes.
Like ring-a-ring-o-roses,
the bed-sores sting
as she winces. Glimpses
a face in the window. ‘Just
a reflection,’ she reassures.
“Thank heavens for that!
And the fact it’s not Tuesday...
when the window cleaner
comes,” and for a second,
she senses a smile and hears
the dim and distant echo
of an old, infectious chuckle
not heard in months.
“Hold still!” she tells her.
“I wouldn’t want you
to fall. Please...don’t
make me laugh, Mum.
It hurts.”
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You have a wonderful knack
You have a wonderful knack of vividly catching moments in time and taking us with you - well done Tina. :-)
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An intimate and somehow
An intimate and somehow happy moment, listed under love and rightly so.
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Absolutely beautiful, Tina!
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Absolutely beautiful, Tina! You've captured a wonderfully tender moment with great care and pathos. Well done :)
Magic xxx
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something strange about it
something strange about it Tina? or it could be just a happy memory :) K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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yes it must be part sad now
yes it must be part sad now I read it again xx
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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Tina, I hope this doesn't
Tina,
I hope this doesn't come out wrong - with your writing you make us intensely aware of your pain, not in a "look at what I've gone through" way (as too many celeb's now seem to do for instance) but in a "this is how it is way". Yes your pain is evident, but so too is your humanity and your spirit.
Thank you for letting me walk a little bit, only a little bit, of your road.
David xxx
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