A very different kind of love (I.P)
By shoe
Wed, 17 Nov 2010
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Does your skin remember, Croetine?
the warm city air, the cloying dust,
the weight of devotion, supplication,
of men who worshipped at your feet.
Perhaps you yearned for a purer love
without the oily film of lust.
He made you wait, beg, plea, pray,
relinquish your hair, your desires, your name,
but when did you ever believe Croetine,
he had the power to refuse you?.
And at night Croetine, do you pose for Him?
when He summons up the moon,
in your dim lit cell, does your body pray,
free of robe and cowl and veil.
Would you pose for me Croetine, one last time?
for I remember the summer heat,
When a goddess stood in the city dirt,
A hundred lovers at her feet.
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I love the last stanza.
Permalink Submitted by Anna Marie on
I love the last stanza. Simply magic.
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Gritty but oh-so-beautiful,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Gritty but oh-so-beautiful, Shirley! Love that last stanza. Brilliant take on the IP :)
Magic xxx
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this is lovely shirley
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is lovely shirley
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new shoe well done on well
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new shoe
well done on well deserved cherry!IP
What a perfect poetic poem, I agree with Highhat
I was just going to put the same, excellent.
julie xx
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Stunning (again!) love the
Stunning (again!) love the address in each stanza and one of the best IP inspired I have read. Really well done Shoe. :-)
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Just brilliant, shoe. A
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Just brilliant, shoe. A wonderful take on the IP.
Tina
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Really excellent - a great
Really excellent - a great response to a difficult IP.
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